Friday, September 30, 2011

Reflect & Revise

I have a serious issue with writing papers. Even if the topic of a paper is something that I'm really interested in, it's the hardest thing for me to do. Don't get me wrong, I can whip out a paper in no time. Will it be my best work? Absolutely not...but it's done, right? Wrong. Writing is one of my least favorite things to do, and it's purely because I don't give myself enough time and I end up completely stressed about it.
When I put my mind to it and actually take the time to write a paper, and I leave myself enough time to look over and edit everything, it generally won't turn out too bad. As it turns out, though, I have some serious time management problems. I never leave myself enough time to edit and revise my papers. I know that this is a bad habit, and I tell myself over and over again that I'll be better about it, but it  doesn't ever turn out that way.

Revising is definitely a good thing to do. It will make it easier for readers to be interested in your writing, it can help with the flow of your paper, and revising can really help fix those huge errors you may have not noticed while writing. On class assignments, of course, it can also help you receive a better grade. :)

With my Poetry Analysis essay, I still have quite a few revisions to make. First of all, I have to make it longer. In my lack of time management, I ran out of time to really finish it. My conclusion isn't complete. I also have to expand on most of my paragraphs and fix the structure of my paper.

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Monday, September 19, 2011

Windigo


             Poetry can have different meanings to different people. It all depends on the person reading it, the context it is being read in, etc. Poems that don’t specifically state what they are about are especially open to interpretation by readers. Even though Windigo by Louise Erdich has its subject in the title, not everyone knows what the legend of Windigo actually is. Windigo seems like it has a very dark theme in the beginning, but it turns out to have a happy ending.
            The poem starts out as some creepy thing that doesn’t seem like it’s going anywhere pleasant. “You knew I was coming for you, little one” (Erdrich, line 1). There is a dark tone about this. This cannibalistic beast called Windigo is coming for a child. There is no way this can end well, right? Not only is the terrible beast coming to take this person away, most likely to eat her (in this case, we will assume this person is a girl), but she is a small child. This reads into people’s deepest fears - to think of your child or younger sibling, or even any child in your life, being taken away into the forest by some terrible creature.
            Erdrich gets even darker in her writing as the poem goes on. She talks about the dog groaning and then Windigo is calling the little girl into the woods with him. She leads you to believe that nothing good will become of this child. The real legend of Windigo has a lot to do with cannibalism, so if you know that when you read closer to the middle of this poem, it will give you chills. “Oh, touch me, I murmured, and licked the soles of your feet” (Erdrich, line 14). It’s almost as if he is tasting her before he digs in for his meal.
            After lines of being led to believe that this child was going to be eaten alive by this thing, some light finally shows. He brings her back home after taking her for some time in the forest. It’s almost as if this child saved him. She went with him into the night. He lured her into his trap with the plans of devouring her, and she made it out alive. He carries her back, even. “And I carried you home, a river shaking in the sun” (Erdich, lines 24-25). It’s like a glimmer of hope in the darkness.
            Windigo by Louise Erdich, like many other poems, is open to interpretation by the readers. There is no denying, though, that although it seems to be a dark poem with no escape, there is a light at the end of the tunnel.





Works Cited
Erdrich, Louise. Windigo. 1984.




I realize this has a lot of work to be done. I have to add a lot more to it. This is a rough draft and all I have for now.

Sunday, September 11, 2011

Response to a Poem - "Windigo"

The poem that really hit me the most was "Windigo" by Louise Erdrich. I don't know exactly why, but it really made me feel something. Maybe because right as it starts out, it seems as though this "creature" is speaking to a small child. "You knew I was coming for you, little one..." (Erdirch, line 1). It actually made me think of my little brother and sister and how I would go crazy if something ever happened to them. I think this is about a beast of some sort. Taking this child away from home. Not even by force, but by louring him/her out. "But I spoke in the cold trees: New one, I have come for you, child hide and lie still" (Erdrich, lines 9-10). After this, the creature takes the child away.
I think many people have this fantasy in their head about the terrible things that could be lurking out there in the world. This poem really speaks to a lot of people, I think, because the "beast" that is being referred to in it may not be an actual creature. It could be anything that is stealing your child away. Or even anything that scares you, such as death.

This Windigo creature seems almost alluring. He steals this child away and then takes her on this exhilarating ride through the forest. I fell like this is the most terrifying kind of beast. The one that makes you feel safe, as if you should be going with it. Then again, at the end of the poem, he brings her back home. “…Until at last morning broke the cold earth and I carried you home” (Erdrich, lines 23-24). It felt like this might be some kind of dream. It kind of actually reminded me of Where the Wild Things Are. The mother calls out for supper, this child goes off with a beast, and ends up right back where she started. I had a hard time deciding what I really felt this poem meant.

Erdrich, Louise. Windigo. 1984.

This is actually a nice song kind of about the legend of Windigo.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qy9OZKNAsIA&feature=related

This is actually kind of terrifying, so if you don't like scary things, I would suggest not watching it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dCowv35qmB8